Submit your script (up to 120 pages max) and have a 1-hour story notes call with Nicola Pittam, an award-winning screenwriter, best-selling author, and One Moorer's Director of Author Services.

This call will help you: 

• elevate your opening scenes to grab the reader immediately
• connect the reader to the main character or the main conflict from start to finish
• troubleshoot any areas that slow pacing or take the reader out of the story
• identify improvements in dialogue, action, and description
• ensure a solid "character + conflict" trajectory throughout the story
• identify any plot holes or unanswered story questions
• entice the reader to keep reading to the end
• layout an action plan for next steps with your script

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Click 'Book Now' button to get feedback from Nicola!