Submit the first 30 pages of your script and have a 30-minute story notes call with Nicola Pittam, an award-winning screenwriter, best-selling author, and One Moorer's Director of Author Services.

This call will help you: 

• elevate your opening scenes to grab the reader immediately
• connect the reader to the main character or the main conflict as soon as possible
• troubleshoot any areas that slow pacing or take the reader out of the story
• identify improvements in dialogue, action, and description
• establish a solid "character + conflict" trajectory in the first act
• entice the reader to keep reading to the end

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Click 'Book Now' button to get feedback from Nicola!